Haiku Diving Rules (an excercise in the creative expression of diving knowledge)

[ClayJar]

A revelation
Who would have ever thought it
Breathing with no mask
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[grassyknoll]

Always remember,
Plan your dive and dive your plan.
You can't breathe water.

 

[ClayJar]

Such a big lobster
But it can't give me more air
Guess I'll try next time
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[grassyknoll]

Sorry Clay Jar, but the Irish in me is protesting too much-I just canna' doo it anymore capn', she as' givin' ya' all she's got!
Sooooooooo.....HIJACK!

Haiku is fine but I’m tired,
In this 5-7-5 prose we are mired.
So I propose instead,
To make it a Limerick thread,
(Until I’m caught by the boss and fired)!


There once was a diver named Dave,
With no training he went into a cave.
His only light failed,
He panicked and flailed,
His body’s still there to this day.

 

[ClayJar]

It's impossible
For one to write a haiku
In limerick form
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There once was a guy, grassyknoll
Who couldn't quite do as he's told
More haiku, you say?
Deary me! There's no way!
So we tossed him out there in the cold.

 

[ClayJar]

Who needs to stay with
Mere haiku and limerick
Write us a sonnet
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[ClayJar]

Diving rules writ in
Iambic pentameter?
Simpler in haiku.
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[grassyknoll]

There once was a guy, grassyknoll
Who couldn't quite do as he's told
More haiku, you say?
Deary me! There's no way!
So we tossed him out there in the cold.

I can't color within the lines either.

Who needs to stay with
Mere haiku and limerick
Write us a sonnet

I see a whole uncharted territory here-Diving anagrams, palandromes etc...

 

[ajames54]

Now fourteen pages
But I have read every one
Boredom is a curse

 

[ajames54]

not just 5 7 5
third line counterpoints idea
pedantic aren't I