I'd be happy to comment and chip in, but I have no idea whatsoever how the writing of a wiki article is done.
Lynne one of the easiest things to do would be to hit the delete button.
But seriously. The
DIR - Criticisms and Controversies is best left out. I mean dropped out in its entirety. This is because an article on DIR should be about DIR, NOT how or why people are against it. Opposition & diverse opinions - that’s easy. Because those set against DIR can really be summed up in the common statement; “
I just do what works best for me.” I can’t tell you how many times I’ve heard this sediment. And this mentality is easily the Overwhelming Majority. That is why the whole section should be dropped.
This is the kind of material under the Criticisms section. And you can sense the tone of opposition in the phase “in the exact words.”
In the exact words of Casey McKinlay, Project Director for the Woodville Karst Plain Project - "I recognize the WKPP for numerous reasons has never been popular with many segments of the diving community.
Really? In Casey’s “exact” words, like he made some sad confession of guilt. This verbiage is indicative of those set against the DIR system. It is not at all positive and does nothing but incite negativity.
Would you say this is an accurate statement? From the Wiki DIR article:
The UK's Cave Diving Group, the longest operative cave diving society in the world. state that because the British cave and sump systems are significantly different in nature than those of the WKPP the practises and configurations of the kit need to be quite different also.
Really? Are you actually going to say that the WKPP doesn’t have to deal with significant amount of silt on a regular basis. And guess what, DIR is bigger than WKPP, and in every part of the world, diving in harsh conditions every day.
And…
British caves and sumps are often so murky and/or narrow that divers can be concussed unless wearing a helmet.
Hummm, DIR practitioners must be dropping like flies cause all the head butting they incur. False
And this statement comes to mind:
... neutral and unbiased opinions must necessarily give a voice to nonsense perspectives and thereby promotes debate between sanity and insanity. You don't have to give equal airtime to nonsense.
What I’m saying is that there are many senseless, false statements in the whole “DIR – Criticisms and Controversies” section that it’s best to be dropped out. Why give airtime to "nonsense". And perhaps I'll end here, as it was best described by Lynne (
highlights mine):
... It's not very well organized and has very redundant parts, and like everything I've ever seen written about DIR diving by non-DIR divers, it's overly equipment-focused. In addition, almost as much space is given to criticisms and trying to find places where the system isn't applicable, as is given to describing the system...