A few observations Ed.
Those tanks are already galvanized, no need to coat them. Personally, I would use paint stripper to remove the remaining paint and leave them as is unless there are some bad spots I don't see. Then again, the old chipping paint adds street cred to the tanks.
The tank boots are not a good idea, they hold salt water. Efficiently rinsing the saltwater off with them on is difficult to do. Trapped saltwater run can ruin a good tank in short order and you will not know it until the next vis. Use them during the dive if you like but remove them for cleaning and storage.
The USD back pack is one of the later ones and while it works OK with a DH it is not optimal. Note in Dales top photo the back pack has a inward curve (toward your back) that allows the BP to be placed over the reg. The USD one does not curve enough and it will not allow you to put the BP any higher than the bottom of the reg, forcing the tank/reg higher than you would like. See Dales second photo. In addition, the straps on that BP have the Drings sewn in so extending the shoulder straps to compensate only works to some degree, a big diver will have trouble getting the tank down far enough before the Drings are setting on top of his shoulders. They are not comfortable there. The only options are to remove the straps and replace them, something I have not been able to bring myself to do, I have a thing about destroying anything old that can not be replaced. On the up side, the bands will accommodate both 72 and 80s so renting tanks is easier. There are some different brands/models of similar BPs from that era that do have a large enough curve to them or the straps are the standard variety that can be lengthened enough to make them work. They used the same style band mount - U bolts and screws-but the bands will only accommodate 72s.These work well because you can extend the straps to lower the tank to where you want it. If you swap bands between them, you end up with the best of both, perfect DH fit and it can use 72 and 80 with no modification. I might not be willing to cut up old BPs but I will swap parts in a second.
On the Explorer, the add says it has a banjo plus both a HP and LP adapters included. So you can use either an old style (3/8x24) or new (7/16x20) thread HP hoses with it. Old style hoses are available from any Trident dealer but most do not stock them so you must special order them, in any case, they can be easily gotten....at least here. If you need a middle man to rder some, I think you can find one or 2 easily. The wagon wheels and valves may or may not be the upgraded ones but the difference is not that great, esp for a first reg. The valves themselves may be the new style, again, they work better but the improvement is not huge. In any case they are simple to replace yourself at any time. The one thing the Explorer has that I would quickly replace it the mouthpiece. I do not like the straight ones, they are too large to suit me. I prefer the silicone Voit hourglass ones with the curved silicone USD ones a close second. Again, something you can replace yourself at a later time. On the yoke, I can't imagine Bryan would send the Explorer with a short yoke knowing full well the banjo would not work. That would be a perfect way to piss off a new customer.