I thought the DM had signaled to do a SS as well.
I'm not sure that the Belizean DM was in shape to agree or not agree, but the American DM, who was assisting the writer, agreed based on their joint assessment of the Belizean DM's condition (and then agreed to abort based on his deterioration).
She doesn't mention donating air to him? She's fine. He's drowsy. Bad air. Get him good air.
Instead of going to the surface, they play around with a dsmb, then do a safety stop? Seriously?
A second dive master (who was more familiar with the group) assisted with the ascent and agreed to do a safety stop based on the situation. The DSMB was (poorly) deployed by the Belizean DM; I'm not sure that counts as "playing around with" the DSMB. Would a donated second have affected the outcome? Maybe, depending on the cause (although it seems unlikely that the writer had a "long hose"), but maybe not, if the DM was having a medical crisis. But the octopus switch, to a semi-conscious diver, also would inject risk: Taking his regulator out of his mouth in order to work the switch, the chance of him blocking insertion of the octopus or spitting it out, the chance of a problem in close quarters--those all seem serious to me, not to mention the risk of a potentially-panicked diver being attached to the rescuer.
Having thought a good bit about this over the last few days, what bothers me the most is, what happened to Mr. Hughes. Was it the same cause as what happened to the DM? Maybe--but he was following the three divers up, but was then on the surface, sank to the floor, and then was pulled back up to the boat. Note his symptoms: "Oral Foaming, blood flow (appears atrial in color), liters of sea water (apparent drowning) and pinpoint (hypoxia) pupils are visually evident." Atrial blood indicates oxygenation, so it seems unlikely he'd been breathing poison gas for 20 or more minutes. Oral foam is an indicator of pulmonary edema, which certainly could result from a rapid ascent. Liters of sea water ingested? Perhaps his regulator was out of his mouth the whole way down; it's not reported either way.
Anyway, although it's tempting to assume one cause for both casualties, I don't think there's enough information. Nor is there enough information, in my view, to conclude that breathing-gas contamination was the cause of either. It's certainly a good time to revisit the discussion around personal CO detectors, but I hope that the process is at least slightly transparent, so that in due course we can learn what happened to these men, and whether these events were a well-managed near miss unrelated to an adjacent tragedy, or two victims of the same equipment and/or human failings.