There is nothing wrong with the tone of your text (says a native English speaker). The facts are a bit offensive but what can you do if those are the facts.
In Norway as anywhere, there does seem to be an assumption that zero deaths would be the norm, a realistic possibility. You note immediately that lots of the visiting divers are making advanced dives such as deep wrecks, wreck penetrations, under the ice and caves. Even kelp forests and open ocean at near-freezing temps aren't well suited for a basic diver unless they have some experience or coaching in the environment.
It would be interesting to see a better breakdown of where and how deaths have occurred. It would also be interesting to know do dive operators generally screen their clients (asking to see advanced certs for people going to a 35-60m wreck for example), or finding out whether people have experience in similar conditions. It would also be interesting to know if the problem is more with individuals (not teams or clubs) arriving to do rec dives but being rusty, or perhaps wholey unprepared for an unguided dive. I know Gulen has a home reef and an advertisement I once received offered unlimited shore diving (lots of nudis - not the swimming after sauna kind). Many recreational divers are not used to the idea of taking a buddy and planning an executing a dive entirely on their own, some might underestimate what a change that is, esp. in a whole new dive environment.
In Norway as anywhere, there does seem to be an assumption that zero deaths would be the norm, a realistic possibility. You note immediately that lots of the visiting divers are making advanced dives such as deep wrecks, wreck penetrations, under the ice and caves. Even kelp forests and open ocean at near-freezing temps aren't well suited for a basic diver unless they have some experience or coaching in the environment.
It would be interesting to see a better breakdown of where and how deaths have occurred. It would also be interesting to know do dive operators generally screen their clients (asking to see advanced certs for people going to a 35-60m wreck for example), or finding out whether people have experience in similar conditions. It would also be interesting to know if the problem is more with individuals (not teams or clubs) arriving to do rec dives but being rusty, or perhaps wholey unprepared for an unguided dive. I know Gulen has a home reef and an advertisement I once received offered unlimited shore diving (lots of nudis - not the swimming after sauna kind). Many recreational divers are not used to the idea of taking a buddy and planning an executing a dive entirely on their own, some might underestimate what a change that is, esp. in a whole new dive environment.