Hey, looks great. Thanks for sharing. I’ve got a whopping 18 or so SM dives so feel free to take this with a grain of salt. I suggest most of the details with SM are about diving what’s comfortable to you and allowing easy access to everything. That being said, here is my personal opinion.
It looks like the lower bands are too low on the tanks and so your arms are forced forward/up by the valves. Can the belt drings be moved further around to your back if you want the tanks higher? My personal preference is more horizontal trim vs. yours that seems angled at 30 degrees. It would cause me to always be swimming "up" with every kick or have lots of unneeded resistance in the water. Could be driven by level of neck flexibility.
One other question, not sure of depth, but your wing looks quite full. Are you correctly weighted?