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How about this suggested editing. (I know, I always argued with my editors!!)
Trim unneeded words, add the park, adjust some descriptions, put the beer back in: World Class Marine Park drift diving, renown cuisine and great hospitality. The island with a Mexican heart and a Caribbean soul! You’ve seen the Corona commercials, experience the reality.
Never mind that the cruise barges ram and bump the coral heads around the piers. :11: Those captains and pilots should wait until their ashore to hit the cervaza. Or do they even bother with pilots?
Trim unneeded words, add the park, adjust some descriptions, put the beer back in: World Class Marine Park drift diving, renown cuisine and great hospitality. The island with a Mexican heart and a Caribbean soul! You’ve seen the Corona commercials, experience the reality.
Never mind that the cruise barges ram and bump the coral heads around the piers. :11: Those captains and pilots should wait until their ashore to hit the cervaza. Or do they even bother with pilots?
Which probly means he checks everything I post, as I goof up a lot, but he does good work.archman:Yes I do, screening the forums for unnecessary frumpery and correcting errors.