Tech Diving Mag - which article and what improvements?

[eponym]

Nice work! I voted for Surface Oxygen, but Deep History was also a good read.

The publication is very handsome. The two-column format works well, line lengths are long enough for justified text without obvious looseness. I would suggest you increase the leading between the two columns--it's narrow enough to interfere with reading flow. And I too like to print an article and read it off-line, so white backgrounds would be great.

Again, congratulations!
Bryan

 

[Tortuga68]

Enjoyed the first issue, keep up the good work!

 

[Red Sea Shadow]

Thanks guys. Your suggestions are noted Bryan.

 

[Red Sea Shadow]

The two-column format works well, line lengths are long enough for justified text without obvious looseness. I would suggest you increase the leading between the two columns--it's narrow enough to interfere with reading flow. And I too like to print an article and read it off-line, so white backgrounds would be great.

Your suggestions have been taken into consideration in the second issue. The leading between the two columns has been increased, and the background is now plain white.

 

[Red Sea Shadow]

Enjoyed the first issue, keep up the good work!

What about the second issue? Did you download it yet?

 

[FireInMyBones]

I just downloaded it. Not read it yet, though I am looking forward to it.

 

[Chief Dave L]

Loved all the articles. I've read both issues now and look forward to future issues.

 

[Red Sea Shadow]

Loved all the articles. I've read both issues now and look forward to future issues.

Glad you liked the articles, Chief