Here's the issue(s) I have with that package.
It's a jacket BC. Many divers start out in jacket - you likely did in your class and transition to something back mounted. If you're going to be diving locally, you'll probably be carrying a lot of weight to compensate for your wetsuit buoyancy so either a back-inflate bc or a backplate/wing configuration may make more sense. I know a lot of people who started in a jacket and changed to a back-inflate model. I know one person who changed back.
They sell a lot of jackets because they're inexpensive, easy to configure for classes or on dives at tourist destinations and with little to no training float you upright. Most casual divers like that. With proper configuration once - either other option does also. BP/W's are typically sized and straps cut to your exact measurements so you can see where those would be unusable in rental fleets.
It's an Edge regulator. Edge/Hog is an fairly new brand - only been around 4-5 years. They have a lot of fans because they are very user serviceable and inexpensive - a very good value per $$. Their dealer network is nowhere near as extensive as some of the other manufacturers though yet. One thing you can do is buy/carry a service kit with you while traveling so in an emergency any competent reg tech can repair yours. So you may want to check on local service in your area also. One of their dealers is Jim Lapenta whose on the board often - he's in PA. So might be your best option. Edge/Hog also has an active mfr's forum here for more information about their products.
The octo is a Sea Elite. Typically you service an octo when you service your reg. They're pretty generic but:
Sea Elite products are sold and serviced exclusively through Divers Supply
Probably not an issue for any competent reg. tech - if they can get parts.
I like and have bought from Diver's Supply myself - just not any of this gear.
I do like the redundancy of having both a depth/pressure gauge and a computer. In case the computer dies you still know where you are and can get back safely. The Leonardo is a good entry level computer. It does Air/Nitrox, is downloadable (optional $90 cable required) and has a backlight. Everything you want in a basic model.
hth,
For other package options look at Scubatoys.com or Leisurepro.com. All of Scubatoys gear has full mfr's warranties, most of LP's does.