Fair point on the editing. Maybe it will make you feel better if you follow the example of my mom, a retired professor and writing instructor, and correct the errors with a red pen as you go.To be clear, my problem is entirely with the editing, not the content. So many grammatical errors. “O-ring” is replaced with “o’ring” everywhere. @Bigbella really made me laugh about that, so maybe I can get over my persistent eye twitches and ignore the presentation.
But the Deep6 manual is an excellent suggestion, I will check that out.