I think you can clean that rig up by going to a simple, clean Hogathian harness and get rid of all the extra bits and multiple D-rings. I do use integrated quick release weight pockets on my wings but I am not understanding exactly what is going on with that set up.
I am not sure about the face planting being a skills issue alone. Most jacket BCs will raise a diver higher in the water which is nice when it is rough out. A wing/BP just barely gets my head up before it starts to face plant me. Skills, okay, what is the skill? Weighting and trim, well, if I am sans rubber suits I may not have any weight or very little and even in a 3/2 suit I may have as little as 6 pounds (though usually I wear a vest and other stuff and a few extra pounds for stability in surge with my camera gets me to 10ish). If I were to try and raise my head up as high as my BC jacket compadres I get face planted big time. But, just saying, I have never owned a BC jacket or such and only used one a single time as a joke (and I liked it).
The modularity, purity and simplicity of a Hogarthian wing/BP (meaning a simple harness Hog rig) and the way the wing trims underwater is my reason for choosing a wing/BP over a conventional BC. And as to the face planting and being able to barely clear my head above water, well, my answer to that is that a wing/BP is not a life jacket (and no BC of any type is), it is a buoyancy compensator and at doing that the wing/BP excells. And another point for me, off and on for decades I have carried a camera rig. The area in front of my chest is like my office. I do not want anything there that absolutely does not need to be there and most BC jackets have a lot of fru-fru, gizmos, fluff and doodads and straps and clips and hanging bits and pieces I cannot deal with that clutter up my office. I like a clean office.
You need a crotch strap, they are not really optional to get the fullest benifit of a wing/BP.
Oh, why might it be useful to get my head up out of the water higher. Well, in some places there are boats and lots of them. I have been admonished, even recently, to keep my head above the water and my eyes on the boat by the captain or DM. Drifit diving divers might be scattered over acres of water. Well, that is easy for the BC jacket folks who ride high and dry even in the rough but this particular day we were running 3 footers and occasionally it seemed more and the waves would wash over me. Putting more air in my wing only pushed me forward. Yeah, that is a negative and hard to convey to a captain that does not care when everybody else is well up as I explain to him the advantages of a wing. I just pumped more air into the wing until the valve burped and laid back on it, yeah it works. But it is a balancing act because without any input, it will face plant me. The captain was happy, me not so much. I do not see a jacket BC in my future, maybe when I am like 90 or something I will give one another go.
And I can put my safety sausage up front like a pool noodle once the boat spots me for counter buoyancy.
James