The biggest 'mistake' that I see is trying to clear a mask without looking up.
Look up, way up.
At the risk of offending, I will disagree, and ESPECIALLY with this diver. Without trying to brag, as an old diver/instructor/anesthesiologist whose business is airways, I have to gently disagree.
Here's the deal. Without a mask that is almost COMPLETELY empty of water already, what happens when you look "way up"? Air bubbles (in your nose) rise and are replaced by water (in your mask), that then trickles down your nose/throat and increases the very sense of panic that worsened this diver's dilemma.
Second point: how do divers in perfect horizontal trim clear their mask? They can't look "way up". They stay horizontal, look out at the horizon and clear. The nose cup is the lowest part of the mask, and when they replace all the water with air, the lowest part is dry. There is NO NEED to look higher than horizontal. Additionally, this provides the added benefit of making the nasal passages HIGHER than the nares (nose holes). That means that it keeps this area dry, and keeps panic down.
Since I'm a PADI Instructor, I know it is professional suicide to tell my students that their textbook and videos and pictures are wrong. The pictures and my required training technique is not wrong. But finding that one phrase in the manual or video that instructs the student to look up AT THE END, is hard to do.
I teach my students to start by looking DOWN at about 45° (keeping water out of the nose). As they exhale thru the nose and the mask empties, ONLY THEN do I tell them to look up, and I explain why (to keep drops from trickling back). As soon as they try their second mask clearing drill while hovering horizontally, they realize that they don't have to look way up, they stay drier in their nose and have less panic.
I'm always reluctant to say that a given post is incorrect, but in this case I feel strongly about this technique, and hope I have adequately explained why.