That does sound like an interesting approach. My concern here would be at 30', how can the diver/tender be assured they're covering the proper area? If the diver is off by 1' - 2', the weapon could be missed.
Quite true. The tender's skill is important as is practice with the procedure. He would essentially landmark the diver off of references on the far shore while being very specific about where he stands and moves as the pivot point.
We have been successful in training evolutions picking up revolver sized objects routinely using this method - admittedly maybe not with the degree of weeds that you seem to be indicating which is why I'd add a couple of buoys at the max distance out as a sort of boundary that the tender can also use to landmark where he drops the diver down (ie - 3rd pass he'll be about 7.5ft left of the buoy, 4th he'll be 10ft etc).
Not as accurate as the sweeps but maybe faster and simplier than the standard jackstay IMO. Moving a jackstay u/w is far less accurate whether its in the weeds or not as the diver controls the pattern and won't know coverage areas without the surface reference from the tender. The diver can't tell if theres bends in the line etc
-- at least in my experience
Hope thats a little clearer