Gee, and here I thought knowing something about what constitutes quality writing, editing and fact checking might have some relevance in judging if a text is well written, edited and vetted.
The thread is about doing AOW straight after OW not about textbooks.
An obscure little book on eastern monasticism in the middle ages.
Fascinating and extremely relevant to the matter at hand.
I was co-author on a number of papers in neuro-anesthesiology including the effects of certain anesthetics in hyperbaric treatment. I did the statistical models while a cognitive psychologist and a research pharmacologist did the medical bits.
What relevance does THIS have to continuing diver education for entry level recreational divers?
I'm sorry you resent that I happened to notice that the book you recommended is a very poorly written, equally poorly edited, and filled with factual errors. But that doesn't mean it isn't.
That's an opinion. Just because you say so doesn't mean it is. I happen to like the way it's written and edited. As far as the factual errors are concerned there may be one, two or five (so far you've mentioned one). That doesn't disqualify it as a text that does the job it sets out to do.
A good text for a relatively inexperienced diver needs to be well vetted so as to not create confusion by mis-information. Such a text needs to have a well crafted flow from topic to topic so as to not distract from what is important. It needs to not vacillate between a very superficial treatment of a topic and in-depth detail.
Again, this is your personal
literary opinion:focus:
And yes, there is some good information in that book. There is useful content.
Which is precisely why I recommend it to entry level recreational divers who want to increase their knowledge.
But it is presented horribly in terms of layout. It is not written about with any great level of care. It is badly vetted and edited.
Here we go again...
I'm afraid you seem to be confused about how books work.
Sure, I know nothing about books...
hbrother:
Thanks for explaining that to me, I would never have gussed :sarcasm:
Then they are fact checked and edited. Then they get published. Then they get sold. Then they get read.
You don't say...:shocked2:
The person reading the book is doing so to fulfill some goal. Usually the end of that goal is either met or not based on if the book is written and edited in light of that goal.
One of the goals of the book is to present enough information to a recreational diver so that he or she can successfully complete the academic portions of the PADI Divemaster exams. It is designed to be used in conjunction with the PADI Diving Knowledge Workbook. The other goal is to be a quick reference book for recreational divers who can use it to look up or read about particular topics in no given order.
You're the only person around here making presumptions
...to present coverage of diving physiology and physics to the average recreational diver and yet makes basic errors of fact relating to physics and physiology is not achieving that goal. Those errors make it into print as a result of the author and editor not doing their jobs. Of course, when those are one and the same person, you really don't have an editor, and the text suffers.
Alex Brylske who in a previous post you said:
I'm always impressed to find an encyclopedia's entries on physics and physiology written and edited by the same person who holds an MA as the height of the formal education. Not that there's anything wrong with an MA, mind you, excepting that you can't earn one in physics or physiology.
holds an MA in instructional systems design, a dual MS in marine biology and coastal zone management, and a Ph.D. in marine science education. Interestingly in 2001, Alex won NOAA's prestigious Walter B. Jones Memorial of Excellence Award for Ocean and Coastal Resource Management. So NOAA, whose book the "NOAA Diving Manual" you recommended in place of the ERD, although I share your opnion that it is an it is an excellent source of diving information, although not relevant to the diver I was talking to at this time in his development, gave this
"idiot" (your words, not mine) an Award!
We are hijacking the thread.
If you want to continue this, PM me, please.